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书面表达。

请根据下列提示写一篇日记,记录5月1日(星期六)你和莉莉一起去参观郑州博物馆的事。

1. 天气:晴朗; 2. 距离:博物馆离家约两千米;

3. 交给工具:自行车;   4. 时间: 8点出发,10点回家;

5. 内容: 见到许多照片,实物,学到很多东西;

6. 游人: 见到很多父母和孩子、学生和老师等。

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【答案】

Saturday, May first, Fine

It was fine today. Lily and I went to visit Zhengzhou Museum. It’s about 2 kilometers away from our homes. So we decided to go there by bike. We started out at 8:00. At the museum we saw many photos and other things. We learned a lot. There we saw a lot of children, parents, students and teachers. At 10:00 we left the museum for home. We had a wonderful time today.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文,描述我和莉莉一起去参观郑州博物馆的事情。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。

亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如2 kilometers away from, decide to do, by bike, start out, leave for以及have a wonder time等,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。

题型:书写/作文 难度:一般
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